My first graded presentation

Here is my first graded presentation in English course. Even though, I have already gave several presentations in different courses, this time could be much more challenge to me. Because, this presentation is focused on the skill and the language you used during the presentation. Therefore, we started to prepare our pair presentation very early.

However, the outcome, I think, is not satisfying for me. I know, our language skill could not be improved just in one day. Mr. Doherty thought our presentation was not so businesslike and the language we used seemed to be less academic, compared with others.

Here is what I still need to improve in my presentation:

• Vocabulary
• Advanced sentence structure
• Language sense
• Pronunciation

Aiming at these purposes, my action is following:

•  Watching more famous presentation, such as TED.
•   Continue learning academic word lists
•   Listening to BBC more often

Hope I get a great progress in the future.